She saw it sitting on the shelf. It was perfect. Shades of red speckled with pink spots as if hand painted by God. He dipped a paintbrush into the paint of life and threw it at his trees. So random, she thought, her hand ran along the curvature of the pomegranate. Its color accentuated by a soft, slow fade from bright red into the dark, fire burnt red. Hard, sharp pentacles jutted outward against her soft, delicate hand. She's never had one, not a real one. They've been blended into drinks and in folded into breads but she holds the pomegranate in her hand and realizes—Persephone had the right idea—this is lust.
First dance with a Pomegranete
2010-12-02T12:44:00-08:00
Jeannie
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Currently Jeannie is revising her next novel ‘Road to Revolution’. And is in the process of drafting ‘Chicago is Dead’.
Ray Bradbury sums up her current writing situation nicely, "quantity produces quality. If you only write a few things, you're doomed."
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