I fanned myself with the brochure. For some reason I didn’t think California would be so hot. The group clustered around a large oak barrel as the Master wine maker, or whatever they called him spouted the, ‘brilliance’ and ‘bouquet’ of this vintage. Still, as I fanned myself – I couldn’t believe that I was roped into taking this wine tasting tour.
“Silvia, you have got to try this. It tastes like the sun kissed meadow after a spring rain,” one of the cohorts said to the woman behind me. All I could think about was how gross that sounded. Who would want to taste a meadow? Eventually we made it to the tasting room. My best friend at my side: nodding and crinkling her brow as if she understood the explanations given to the group. Apparently I did not keep my distaste hidden. My eyes roll when the ‘Master’ started talking about strong starts and quick finishes which prompted her elbow into my ribs while I opened my mouth to reply.
“Ouch.” I threw an evil glance to her. “Why did you do that?”
“Because I knew what you were going to say.”
“I doubt you could know what I was about to say.” I snort. “All I was going to say was that a strong start and a quick finish.”
“Sounds just like every man you know.” She interrupts my sentence.
“Oh, um – then you did know what I was going to say.”
© Jeannie Hart 2010
Writing Prompt: Wine Tasting
Writing Prompt: Wine Tasting
2010-01-12T13:12:00-08:00
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Jeannie Hart is a published writer, who works in diverse fields of the industry. She has had pieces published through local and national websites, indie papers, and magazines.
Currently Jeannie is revising her next novel ‘Road to Revolution’. And is in the process of drafting ‘Chicago is Dead’.
Ray Bradbury sums up her current writing situation nicely, "quantity produces quality. If you only write a few things, you're doomed."
Currently Jeannie is revising her next novel ‘Road to Revolution’. And is in the process of drafting ‘Chicago is Dead’.
Ray Bradbury sums up her current writing situation nicely, "quantity produces quality. If you only write a few things, you're doomed."
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